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Falling - So deep.
From the light to the darkness.
Only once, you never get up again.

Running - So far.
From the known to the unknown.
Only once, you never get back.

Being picked up - By The One.
From the darkness to the light.
Only once, you never fall again.

Being drawn back - By The One.
From the unknown to the known.
Only once, you never need to run again.
©2004-2009 ~Eli-Kristin
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The hopeless romantic in me let loose..

Comments are appreciated as always..

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:iconblushingsilly07:
I like this, I love the repetition of the last sentence in each of the stanzas. This is a kool piece. :)

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So I got me some horses, to ride on, to ride on
they say that your demons
can't touch me here ~ tori amos
:iconbabydollrm:
Very nice! :hug: :lick:

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Is it wrong for Homer Simpson to be my hero?
:iconeli-kristin:
Thank you! :)

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Just go off thinking I said something smart..

:flagcanada: took my :heart:
:iconeli-kristin:
Thanks :)

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Just go off thinking I said something smart..

:flagcanada: took my :heart:
:iconsirquester:
I like this one. Not only once, but every time I read it. :)
:iconeli-kristin:
nicely put :D

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Just go off thinking I said something smart..

:flagcanada: took my :heart:
:icondonnella:
Only once have i seen anything as good as this, and that's right here!!!! I love it!!!!

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I'm strong on the surface, not all the way through.
I never was perfect, but neither where you ~ Linkin Park
:iconeli-kristin:
Why, thank you :)

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Just go off thinking I said something smart..

:flagcanada: took my :heart:
:iconthenathanator:
hmmm interesting.. though, you say it's the hopless romantic letting lose in you.. whereas to me it sounds like it's talking about death.. so you could think of death as being an 'unknown' and then 'the one' could be god... or the devil I guess.. but we'll say god. :)

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~PenWieldingPoets A club for POETS THAT USE METER, or would like to learn.

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